Big Girl Love – A Ballad

To start off Week 2 of the Writing 201 course, we were prompted to write a ballad with a big hero/heroine, using the device of ‘epistrophe’ – a cluster of words repeated at the end of each verse.

I went with some words I heard last week. Words spoken to a big girl who must have looked like she needed to hear them.

Love for a Big-Hearted Girl

She was always a big girl, large from the start.

She followed the rules  – did her dutiful part.

Then she heard the words that sunk deep in her heart:

Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. People love you, you know.

At school she was tall, above all her peers,

In the back row of photos in every school year.

They said ‘Big is beautiful!’ to dry up her tears.

Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. People love you, you know.

Strangers asked for directions as they slowed to pass by.

She figured, they figured, she’d see far from that high.

And if she could help, she’d be helpful, she’d try.

Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. People love you, you know.

Princes were paraded before that big-hearted girl.

But unknowing feet trampled the shine off that pearl.

They’d all gone before they saw her beauty unfurl.

Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. People love you, you know.

Some say she’s fun. Others say she’s scary.

It’s hard to be all things, unless you’re a fairy.

Those words, her reality, can seem so contrary.

Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. People love you, you know.

When reality bites and that big girl quakes.

Goes to sleep with the fears and rejections that shake.

Her big God’s love is there when she wakes:

“Wherever you are, wherever you go, you’ll always be loved. I love you, you know.”

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15 thoughts on “Big Girl Love – A Ballad

    • Thanks, Muzzy. There are benefits to being tall – mostly benefits for others – but it can be hard at times. I’m sure there are different challenges for those who aren’t so big. Glad to hear you’re an understanding Mum.

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    • You are so right, Richa! It’s never enough to hear those words just once in awhile. We have too many other messages coming at us as (daily!) that we can so easily forget the truth that we are loved by God and by others.

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  1. Wow shazzameena, this is so poignant and loving and hopeful and beautiful. My heart felt sad and glad at the same time.

    Glad for these (so well said and precious):
    “She followed the rules – did her dutiful part.”
    “And if she could help, she’d be helpful, she’d try.”
    “Her big God’s love is there when she wakes:”

    Sad for this:
    “They’d all gone before they saw her beauty unfurl.”

    Beautifully, beautifully, beautifully written. I’m so glad you got up the courage.

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